Comments on: Chapter V

By: anon y mouse

anon y mouse — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 03:03:41 +0000

I’ll have a small bear, please.

By: nabi al-raml

nabi al-raml — Sat, 07 Jun 2008 00:24:46 +0000

No, it’s not too similar. Just probably the first referent most of us have. I often go to Dune, but Muad’dib’s prescience was a bit more clear. It’s nice to have things a little vague.

By: Robert Gould

Robert Gould — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 23:37:26 +0000

Good chapter! I wonder what’s happening here… someone going round beating up women? Need the next chapter now

By: Chad-Writtenfire

Chad-Writtenfire — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 00:16:06 +0000

Haha. I was thinking of the similarity to Spiderman when I wrote that, but Spiderman wasn’t where I got the idea. General precognition was. I was hoping it wouldn’t seem too similar. It’s not a perfect clairvoyance/precognition, like Peter Parker’s is. Whoever/whatever gave him the mark just sticks a hand in occasionally, and nothing too explicit.

By: nabi al-raml

nabi al-raml — Thu, 05 Jun 2008 23:24:35 +0000

Yay! Seeing that there was an update has helped me overcome my jetlag. Nice chapter. I like that Allen has a ’spidey sense’